This is a wonderful picture of a dark Lena. One of the only things I would advise you on would be her leg. It seems a little large in proportion to her delicate torso. Also, the blobs seem a little pix-elated in comparison to the rest of the black, swirling smoke that is wafting off of her. Are you going for that look? The things that I think are the most spectacular are her dark eyes. They seem to jump out of the picture and captivate every spectator. I love the casual way that her dress is slightly uneven/ruffled. It gives her a 'bad girl' look that I would expect in an evil girl. In the end, it's an excellent image that has a great chance of winning. I could see that on bill boards!